Tuesday, September 15, 2009
Revision Plan
My revision plan is to give more examples to prove my point on my paragraphs. Add more ethos into it, get the credibility from some authority. Put in more pathos by sharing a personal story and logos by simply telling the logical side to my opinion. I also plan to meet up with Sister Cowley sometime this week, so she can look over my paper. That way I'll know if I'm on track with the opinion editorial.
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Sister Cowley helped me so much!! She gave me insights I didn't even think about. Going to her for help is definitely something you don't want to procrastinate! So good for you Melissa :)
ReplyDeleteDefinitely meet with Sister Cowley soon! She's really good at explaining everything and catching the mistakes that you yourself may miss!
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