MLK?: Rhetorical Analysis revision plan

First off, finish my last paragraph, there is still a huge chunk of analysis missing from my paper. Second, like in the conferences we had today, reading my paper aloud will help with the punctuation and grammatical errors. Also, styling. The paper just looks so menacing in blog form. More paragraph breaks and subject headings would be a nice touch. Also, another picture.

Let's see what I can knock out...

Ok so here is what I figure I need to do...
1. solidify exactly what logos I want to use in my paper...make sure its good...and analyze it.
2. Focus on counter arguments. Be concerned with what the reader thinks so that I can make my paper that much better.
3. knock out what's unneccessary...that could be all of it:)
4. Be more concise...try using smaller words instead of long phrases. parallel writing, and sentence rearranging.
5. Make it an easy read!
6. Keep it short and sweet.
7. double check my support (logos, pathos, and ethos)

Revision Plan

My revision plan is to give more examples to prove my point on my paragraphs. Add more ethos into it, get the credibility from some authority. Put in more pathos by sharing a personal story and logos by simply telling the logical side to my opinion. I also plan to meet up with Sister Cowley sometime this week, so she can look over my paper. That way I'll know if I'm on track with the opinion editorial.

Revision Plan

First thing I am going to is to give my paper more order by shortening the introduction and move all that content/proof to the body paragraphs. Next, reading the paper out loud to catch grammatical errors and weird sounding phrases. the conclusion seems a little weak, I need to reinforce the position probably with another sentence of my ideas.

I'll try not to procrastinate the revision, because I know I am going to forget what Sister Cowley said today.