Thursday, October 15, 2009

MLK?: Rhetorical Analysis revision plan

First off, finish my last paragraph, there is still a huge chunk of analysis missing from my paper. Second, like in the conferences we had today, reading my paper aloud will help with the punctuation and grammatical errors. Also, styling. The paper just looks so menacing in blog form. More paragraph breaks and subject headings would be a nice touch. Also, another picture.
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  1. KendrickOctober 15, 2009 at 10:21 PM

    I know what you mean with it looking menacing... if it was just on paper, a bunch of text is okay. but a blog needs to be exciting, interesting, not just a wall of text... Where do you plan on putting the other picture? Will you put it in the middle of the text somewhere or at the end?

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  2. Emily HuffakerOctober 15, 2009 at 10:29 PM

    I think you had great context, but adding those visual things will really boost up the affect of your paper. Like you said Kendrick, a blog especially needs to be exciting and interesting. I think with those few things you add/change you will be all set!

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  3. CorinneOctober 15, 2009 at 10:44 PM

    I agree with Kendrick. A blog needs to keep the readers attention and what better way than to make it exciting.

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