Thursday, October 15, 2009

My Revision Plan

I plan on revising my rhetorical analysis through these ways:

1) Incorporate a screenshot image or a definition to convey something interesting and more attention-grabbing on the blog

2) Include a hyperlink to the website of my article

3) Include some examples of users' comments of the article in my concluding paragraph

4) Make the blog version of the analysis more appealing, with no double spacing and an inviting font.

5 comments:

  1. Hey, I think adding a hyperlink to the page looked at is a really smart idea.

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  2. I am copying you with the hyperlink I decided.

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  3. I think including comments is a good idea!

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  4. I like the image idea will grab attention and the comments will make the reader understand more.

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  5. Adding pictures is essential on the internet. No one reads any thing that has no pictures on it.

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