For this revision plan I am going to:
1.Be more specific with my examples.
2.Add a video
3.Add more pictures
4.Try to make my paper at least more than thousand words.
5.See Sister Cowley and have her revise my paper again.
6.Add a personal reflection
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I think adding a video sounds like a really good idea.
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Lindsay. That video you showed us, Melissa will be very powerful.
ReplyDeleteI know that I had problems making my analysis long enough also but if you make all these changes. The words should just come naturally
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