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Revision Plan
Obviously something I need to work on is the length of my piece. I am going to make it longer by talking more about the tools that the website employs. I am going to work on explaining how they work for the target audience. I am also going to work more on the organization of my paper.
And pictures! :)
ReplyDeleteI really thought that first picture does an excellent job in playing with the reader's pathos. It would definitely help to put 1 or 2 more pictures on it in order to strengthen the analysis.
ReplyDeleteScott and Alex - I agree with adding pictures, without going overboard that is. Changing sizes of the pictures would be neat too; some big, some small. It would add contrast.
ReplyDeleteOne thing that I learned more from the conference was that since it can be a blog format you can add like subtitles maybe to organize your paper more.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Alex, pictures make the paper more interesting, and would add a little more length.
ReplyDeletePictures are always good, people really enjoy pictures. Haha Melissa, it sure does make the paper longer. Not only that but it gives the reader something to visually help them think about the paper, and give them a very small break in reading the paper.
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