Thursday, October 15, 2009

My Revision Plan

I need to make my paper flow better. I plan on trying to connect more of my analysis to make this work better. I also plan on putting a picture of my website in the analysis. I need to work on my opening paragraph so that it wont sound like I am only writing the analysis for an assignemt, even though I am. :)
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  1. Melissa EOctober 16, 2009 at 8:19 AM

    I like the last part of your revision plan, made me laugh a bit. The flow of your paper will definitely capture your audience.

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