Thursday, October 15, 2009

Revisions Revisions Revisions

I am going to talk about my audience throughout the paper, rather than just at the beginning. I am going to also figure out how to put a picture in the middle of my paper and change to formatting (font and spacing). I am also going to include the fact that I am LDS and part of the targeted audience. I am also going to rework some of my phrasing. I will do this sometime before the due date on Wednesday.
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  1. JoshOctober 17, 2009 at 3:11 PM

    I guess friday's class really helped you on your revision plan then.

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  2. JoshOctober 17, 2009 at 3:12 PM

    I'm also glad you decided to do this before the due date... good job!

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  3. Mindy P.October 18, 2009 at 4:31 PM

    That's a really good idea because it will definitely make your paper more personal, and let you connect with the audience even more! Before the due date is a great idea too:)

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  4. Sarah HansenOctober 19, 2009 at 12:35 AM

    Mindy that's a good point! More personal...sounds good.....

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