1. develop my counter argument and then explain why my idea addresses its issues. Basically just develop the idea so that readers view my issue as actually being a problem that someone needs to do something about (bring the issue to maturity)
2. work on my wording and examples to include the three elements - ethos, pathos, and logos
3. create smooth transitions between my ideas/paragraphs
I will most likely make these changes over the weekend, but I hope to get started sooner than that.
well it sounds like you know exactly what to do! so that is a very great start. I know that the hardest process for me is figuring out what to change.
ReplyDeleteI am so with you on number 3! haha I think everyone needs to do that a little in their papers
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