Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Revision plan

I plan on working to make smoother transitions between paragraphs. I also want to make sure that my paragraphs are in an order that doesn't confuse my readers or seem repetitive. Additionally, I want to condense my intro to grab the readers attention and focus it more directly to my topic.

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  1. Oops, I forgot a timeline. Ideally, I want to have this done by the end of the week so that I ca ask questions in class or during lab hours if I need to. This also allows me time to have someone else proofread my work for spelling and grammar errors.

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