Revision Plan

For my revision plan, the biggest thing I'm going to focus on is developing it a little further. I'm going to consider what other problems might be caused because we can't ride bikes between each class. (For example, being much more stressed because we don't have much time to get to some classes without our bikes.) Also, I'm going to focus on how this affects others, and not just myself. Right now it may seem like this is a problem just for me, but I'm going to present this problem as as affecting more than just myself. I'll also develop the counter argument a little bit more. And of course, I'll answer the question of "so what".