Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Revision Plan

My plan to revise my editorial is to reread my paper and fix the obvious errors. Then I am going to research more so I can add more logos to my argument. Then I am going to rewrite my paper so that it is a stronger argument and can help bring about change on campus. I may also visit the writing center after I have rewritten it to get more comments and pointers on how to make it better.

2 comments:

  1. Depending on who your audience is, maybe even have someone from that specific audience read it. See if they feel like it really does speak directly to them or not... just an idea

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  2. I agree with you Kendrick. That would make your argument work much more effectively if it was interpreted in the mind of one from that particular audience.

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