During my revision plan, I am going to add more examples to support my arguments so that the reader can get more of a clear picture of what is going on, and also why they should pay a little more attention to my arguments.
At the end of the editorial I plan on giving an example as to why we should try and have better sportsmanship and explain why it will help both schools in the long run to root for instead of tear down the other team.
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I wouldn't put examples in your conclusion. that's what your body paragraph are for.
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