2. Talk to high school students (sisters and their friends) to see how their teachers use new media and use those examples in my paper
3. Find stronger quotations from articles to help my argument
4. re-write and take it back to Sister Cowley by Friday
5. Read out loud to somebody to fix errors and make sure my ideas flow and everything leads back to my thesis
I think talking to your sister and her friends is a really good idea! Also reading it out loud is smart too, I'll have to try that :)
ReplyDeleteThat is a great idea of reading it out loud to somebody because I usually find that I start feeling like my paper doesn't get any where since I have been working on it for a while.
ReplyDeleteSarah and Caro - Reading your paper out loud really is quite amazing. It helps fix punctuation and sentence structure especially.
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